Wake up early and take a morning walk, sit for meditation and have a self-talk. Make a list of things to be done today and go as per it for the rest of the day. Do give a sweet smile for people you come across; for it makes you feel better without energy loss. Do all the work putting forth your self-interest, Outcome of it will be surely the best. If something goes wrong, find the reason behind; Learn from the mistake and do not repeat next the time. Do help others if they are in need, some day or the other you might be there indeed. Love, respect and do care for your youngsters and elders; for all these fill your life with rainbow colours. Extrude ego, enmity, selfishness from your mind; Forgive others for mistakes, and be generous and kind. Just try all these for at least today; If it gives you peace, do it every day.
Hey Fathima, this poem is really a lesson for individuals who want changes in their life...Just follow the lines written in the poem and everything will be right.
Sep 26, 2010
Writer ketta zali go by: Ismail Shabandri
Writer ketta tikun zali?
Sep 21, 2010
Thanks by: fathima najlaa
Thank you for such an encouraging comment. Actually it's the first time I tried to write a poem. If I keep writing I think I can improve. If you people find some corrections need to be done, please do tell me in comment. It will surely help me. I'll be glad if people help me in detecting my mistakes. Thank you. Have a peaceful life. :)
Sep 20, 2010
Wonderful! by: Tasneem Qaiser Alvi
'A Peaceful Day' is a beautifully written poem. It appears as if my inner feelings have been penned down in a very simple and forceful manner. I wish we all seek guidance from this poem and by practising the steps mentioned we can develop exemplary habits among us and our whole life will become a symbol of peace and tranquility. Well Done!
Sep 20, 2010
Condensed advice by: Fion
Hi Fathima, thanks for condensing your advice for a peaceful day into a poem and sharing it with us here! Several great pointers in there.